diff --git a/README.org b/README.org
index 3553487..dbb9864 100644
--- a/README.org
+++ b/README.org
@@ -5,13 +5,13 @@
 
 These are my GNU/Linux configuration files. [[https://github.com/SqrtMinusOne/dotfiles][View at GitHub]].
 
-Most of the software is configured with [[https://leanpub.com/lit-config/read][literate configuration]] strategy via Emacs' [[https://orgmode.org/][Org Mode]]. This way has its pros and cons, but overall it's pretty nice to keep the configs interweaved with comments in a handful of files.
+I use the [[https://leanpub.com/lit-config/read][literate configuration]] strategy via Emacs' [[https://orgmode.org/][Org Mode]] wherever possible. It has its pros and cons, but I find it pretty nice to keep the configs interweaved with comments in a handful of files
 
-The files themselves are managed and deployed via [[https://yadm.io/][yadm]], but I use Org Mode for things like config templating.
+The files themselves are managed and deployed via [[https://yadm.io/][yadm]], although I use Org Mode for things like config templating.
 
-My current GNU/Linux distribution is [[https://guix.gnu.org/][GNU Guix]]. I like Guix because, among other things, it allows [[https://guix.gnu.org/cookbook/en/html_node/Advanced-package-management.html#Advanced-package-management][declaring the required software]] in configuration files, so I can have the same set of programs across multiple machines (look for tables with "Guix dependency" in the header).
+My current GNU/Linux distribution is [[https://guix.gnu.org/][GNU Guix]]. I like Guix because, among other things, it allows [[https://guix.gnu.org/cookbook/en/html_node/Advanced-package-management.html#Advanced-package-management][to declare the required software]] in configuration files, so I can have the same set of programs across multiple machines (look for tables with "Guix dependency" in the header).
 
-The central program to all of that is, of course [[https://www.gnu.org/software/emacs/][GNU Emacs]]. As of the moment of this writing, it takes ~50% of my screen time and has the largest share of configuration here.
+The central program to all of that is, of course, [[https://www.gnu.org/software/emacs/][GNU Emacs]]. At the time of this writing, it takes ~50% of my screen time and has the largest share of configuration here.
 
 Table of contents and software:
 - [[file:Emacs.org][Emacs.org]]